10/22 homework
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Hello [이름]!
You have a point in what you were saying with those two issues. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and opinions! Here are the corrections I have made. I hope you read and analyze them J
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-Verna-
1. It is difficult to say that this behavior is right or wrong.
>> It is difficult to say if this behavior is right or wrong.
But I think, if someone tell me the reason of being late is what to help an elderly, I wouldn't believe someone.
>> But I think if someone tells me the reason for them being late is that they helped an elderly, I wouldn't believe him/her.
Because even if they had a good purpose for other people, company can’t accommodate them.
>> Because even if they had a good purpose for other people, the company can't accommodate them.
If I face same situation, I'll ask other people to help an elderly.
>> If I face the same situation, I'll ask other people to help the elderly.
2. It's very worth studying for succeeding in the future.
>> It's really worth studying to succeed in the future.
Because we live in competitive society, we must have competitiveness to survive.
>> Because we live in a competitive society, we must have competitiveness to survive.
And to be a top on our field, we have to study our major or second language.
>> And to be on top of our field, we have to study our major/degree/course, or a second language.
If we don’t study anything, we would behind compared to other person who do their best.
>> If we don't study anything, we would be behind compared to other people who do their best.
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