10/22 homework

2018-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

[ Describe your favorite fictional character in as much detail as possible] I really love Harry potter's story. I like the character of Harry potter having courage and consideration. Everyone have own weakness. Some people have a problem about family, handicap physically etc. But, I think we must overcome by ourselves. Anyone can do that instead of me. So, I think the mental health is most important to live nowadays. I like Harry potter and I want to live like him.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Wonderful day; wonderful thoughts! Thank you for doing your homework. You did great! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I really love Harry potter\'s story.

>>Correct
I like the character of Harry potter having courage and consideration.

>>Correct
Everyone have own weakness.

>>Everyone has their own weaknesses.
Some people have a problem about family, handicap physically etc.

>>Some people have a problem about family, physically handicapped etc.
But, I think we must overcome by ourselves.

>>But, I think we must overcome it ourselves.
Anyone can do that instead of me.

>>Anyone can do it, not only me.
So, I think the mental health is most important to live nowadays.

>>So, I think mental health is the most important for survival nowadays.
I like Harry potter and I want to live like him.

>>Correct

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