10/22 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[What aspects of life in the city would you complain about?]
It\'s noise.
When I have lived in the city, I didn\'t notice the noise.
But, I lived in the countryside in Japan for two years, and I am still living in a silent village now in Jeju.
So, when I go to Seoul sometimes, I can recognize how loud the city is.
There are many cars and people in the city basically.
So, there is noise almost always, even at night.
It makes us hard to calm down.
And it is difficult to feel and hear the sound of nature such as birds, insects, and wind.
When I wake up in the morning, I can hear the sound of birds in Jeju.
When I go back home at night, the sound of leaves swaying in the wind makes me comfortable.
I like these kinds of sound.
The city life is very comfortable because there are many shopping malls and I can find everything near home.
But, nowadays I prefer to live in the semi-countryside.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for spending a little of your time with your homework. I appreciate the effort. ^ ^
I have to agree with you. City noises can be such a bother. Aside from that, you can not actually hear the sound of nature already as compared to the countryside! I would love to live in the countryside when I grow old. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT
When I have lived in the city, I didn\'t notice the noise.
When I have lived in the city, I didn\'t notice the noise.
>>CORRECT or
>>When I have lived in the city, I wasn\'t bothered much with the noise.
But, I lived in the countryside in Japan for two years, and I am still living in a silent village now in Jeju.
>>CORRECT
So, when I go to Seoul sometimes, I can recognize how loud the city is.
So, when I go to Seoul sometimes, I can recognize how loud the city is.
>>So, when I visit Seoul, I become so aware of how loud the noise is in the city.
There are many cars and people in the city basically.
There are many cars and people in the city basically.
>>CORRECT
So, there is noise almost always, even at night.
So, there is noise almost always, even at night.
>>CORRECT
It makes us hard to calm down.
It makes us hard to calm down.
>>It makes it difficult to settle down and fell relaxed.
And it is difficult to feel and hear the sound of nature such as birds, insects, and wind.
And it is difficult to feel and hear the sound of nature such as birds, insects, and wind.
>>CORRECT
When I wake up in the morning, I can hear the sound of birds in Jeju.
When I wake up in the morning, I can hear the sound of birds in Jeju.
>>CORRECT
When I go back home at night, the sound of leaves swaying in the wind makes me comfortable.
When I go back home at night, the sound of leaves swaying in the wind makes me comfortable.
>>CORRECT
I like these kinds of sound.
I like these kinds of sound.
>>I like these kinds of sounds.
The city life is very comfortable because there are many shopping malls and I can find everything near home.
The city life is very comfortable because there are many shopping malls and I can find everything near home.
>>CORRECT
But, nowadays I prefer to live in the semi-countryside.
But, nowadays I prefer to live in the semi-countryside.
>>CORRECT
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