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Do you think that most people think about peace regularly?
I think, most people rarely think about peace in their daily lives.
>> or: I reckon that most people don\'t normally think about peace.
This is because, I believe that we can only feel peace when it is gone.
>> or: I believe that we can only feel the absence of peace when there is chaos or when we are at war.
>> or: I believe that we can only appreciate peace when we are on the brink of war.
Of course not in some countries, but at least our daily lives are not under any threat.
>> or: It goes without saying that this is not the case in some countries that are under the constant threat of war or already at war as they probably unceasingly pray for peace.
We can\'t feel peace, it seems self-evident that we do not think about peace.
>> Since we live in peaceful countries, it seems self-evident that we do not think about peace.
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