10.23 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! It's a nice Thursday because today is the day before weekend eve day.
I am going to the some persimmon festival in Bookmeun this weekend.Of course with my wife. I heard that so many Korean singers will come there.I will enjoy them.
Homework.
1)What are you doing on Saturday?
2)I am going to the countryside on the weekend.
3)I haven't been to the countryside in December.
4)So you'll be there for the whole weekend. I'll be missing you!
5)I am leaving in the afternoon. Maybe at three o'clock.
Thank you! Byebye!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for your homeowrk and for sharing your plan this weekend. Have fun and enjoy your time with your wife.
~Kelly^^
Hi there!
>> Correct.
It\'s a nice Thursday because today is the day before weekend eve day.
>> It\'s a nice Thursday because today is the day before the weekend.
I am going to the some persimmon festival in Bookmeun this weekend.
>> I am going to persimmon festival in Bookmeun this weekend.
Of course with my wife.
>> Correct.
I heard that so many Korean singers will come there.
>> I heard that so many Korean singers will go there.
I will enjoy them.>> I will enjoy in the festival.Homework.1)What are you doing on Saturday?
>> Correct.2)I am going to the countryside on the weekend.
>> Correct.
>> or: at3)I haven\'t been to the countryside in December.
>> since4)So you\'ll be there for the whole weekend. I\'ll be missing you!
>> Correct.5)I am leaving in the afternoon. Maybe at three o\'clock.
>> Correct.Thank you! Byebye!
>> Correct.
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