10/23 homework

2018-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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[If you could only eat one food for the rest of your life, what would it be? Describe it and explain why you’d choose it.] If I could only eat one food for the rest of my life, I want to choose baked meat. I love both of meat and vegetables. But, If we eat only vegetable, my stress level will be increased within a few days. Surely the meat also make me boring, but it's better than only eating vegetable. I am really like to eat baked meat. In addition, If I have some sauce, I can make many kind of cuisine using meat. But, even if only baked meat is allowed, I can live with them. However, actually, there are so many delicious food in the world.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework! Nice thoughts on this one. I guess your answer is brilliant! Why not? Baked meat and vegetable! You have all the nutrients you need to live for the rest of your life! Awesome! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

If I could only eat one food for the rest of my life, I want to choose baked meat.

>>Correct
I love both of meat and vegetables.

>>I love both meat and vegetables.
But, If we eat only vegetable, my stress level will be increased within a few days.

>>But, if we only eat vegetables, my stress level will increase within a few days.
Surely the meat also make me boring, but it\'s better than only eating vegetable.

>>Surely meat will bore me too, but it\'s better than only eating vegetables.
I am really like to eat baked meat.

>>I really like eating baked meat.
In addition, If I have some sauce, I can make many kind of cuisine using meat.

>>In addition, if I have some sauce, I can make many kinds of cuisine using meat.
But, even if only baked meat is allowed, I can live with them.

>>But, if only baked meat is allowed, I can live with it.
However, actually, there are so many delicious food in the world.

>>Correct

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