10/24 homework

2018-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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[Should employers set aside time during the day for their employees to exercise? What might be some of the advantages or disadvantages of this?] I think most owner dislike this suggestion because the working time is decreased. However, we can not ignore the working efficiency. Particularly, most employee's working efficiency is lowest after lunch. I also feel every day like lazy emotion after lunch. At this time, the short nap or exercise is very good for refreshment. I think this system should be apply to the people having service job. In order to offer service with smile, the employee have to feel happiness and willingness.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. ^ ^
Nice thoughts on this one. Exercise in the office isn\'t a new idea. But it\'s a clear win-win in terms of health, morale and productivity! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah

I think most owner dislike this suggestion because the working time is decreased.
>>I think most owners dislike this suggestion because the working time is decreased.
However, we can not ignore the working efficiency.
>>Perfect!
Particularly, most employee\'s working efficiency is lowest after lunch.
>>Particularly, most employees working efficiency is lowest after lunch.
I also feel every day like lazy emotion after lunch.
>>I also feel lazy everyday, usually after lunch.
At this time, the short nap or exercise is very good for refreshment.
>>At this time, a short nap or a light exercise would be very good to be refreshed and be energized.
I think this system should be apply to the people having service job.
>>I think this kind of system should be applied to people in service jobs.
In order to offer service with smile, the employee have to feel happiness and willingness.
>>In order to offer services with a smile, an employee has to feel good and willing.

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