10/24 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[What kind of people do you get fed up with?]
I don\'t want to have any relationship with a negative person.
Everyone has a lot of concerns and worries.
But, I think the Ideas of a negative person are different from those.
Although I am not in touch now, I had this kind of friend when I was in graduate school.
She always pointed out my dress or appearance.
She always blamed others.
When I was with her, I felt I am also changing negatively.
So, I slowly moved away from her.
I think that friends or colleagues are also one of the environment to affect me.
When we think of positive and future-oriented things, the good futures come true.
I read the book \'The Secret\'.
The writer said we are attracting the things which we are thinking about.
So, positive thinking is very important for life with happiness, money, and peace.
I believe it.
So, when I meet someone, I want to say positive things.
I think this is not lip service.
It\'s a free gift for others.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for your thoughts in this homework. I appreciate it! ^^
I definitely agree with you. It\'s always nice to surround ourselves with positive people. And besides, happiness is contagious. We wouldn\'t want to hang out or be with negative people because we exactly know what effect it will have on us. Just like you, I also believe in the law of attraction, which uses the power of the mind to translate whatever is in our thoughts and materialize them into reality. In basic terms, all thoughts turn into things eventually. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT
Everyone has a lot of concerns and worries.
Everyone has a lot of concerns and worries.
>>CORRECT
But, I think the Ideas of a negative person are different from those.
But, I think the Ideas of a negative person are different from those.
>>CORRECT
Although I am not in touch now, I had this kind of friend when I was in graduate school.
Although I am not in touch now, I had this kind of friend when I was in graduate school.
>>Although we no longer keep in touch, I had this friend in graduate school.
She always pointed out my dress or appearance.
She always pointed out my dress or appearance.
>>CORRECT
She always blamed others.
She always blamed others.
>>CORRECT
When I was with her, I felt I am also changing negatively.
When I was with her, I felt I am also changing negatively.
>>CORRECT
So, I slowly moved away from her.
So, I slowly moved away from her.
>>CORRECT or
>>So. I slowly drifted away from her.
I think that friends or colleagues are also one of the environment to affect me.
>>I think those kinds of friends or colleagues would greatly affect me.
When we think of positive and future-oriented things, the good futures come true.
When we think of positive and future-oriented things, the good futures come true.
>>When we think of positive and future-oriented things, the good things come true.
I read the book \'The Secret\'.
I read the book \'The Secret\'.
>>CORRECT
The writer said we are attracting the things which we are thinking about.
The writer said we are attracting the things which we are thinking about.
>>CORRECT
So, positive thinking is very important for life with happiness, money, and peace.
So, positive thinking is very important for life with happiness, money, and peace.
>>So, positive thinking is very important for life if we want to attract happiness, money, and peace.
I believe it.
I believe it.
>>CORRECT
So, when I meet someone, I want to say positive things.
So, when I meet someone, I want to say positive things.
>>CORRECT
I think this is not lip service.
I think this is not lip service.
>>CORRECT
It\'s a free gift for others.
It\'s a free gift for others.
>>CORRECT
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.