10/25 homework
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Do you think that there is anything worth dying for?
>>Correct
It is worth dying for drinking coffee for me.
>>Drinking coffee for me is worth dying for.
I drink coffee 3 cups everyday on a average.
>>I drink 3 cups of cofee everyday on average.
When I’m in my office, there is always a mug cup in front of my desk top.
>> When I뭢 in my office, there always a mug/cup in front of my desk top.
And when I meet my friends I always go coffee shops after dinner.
>> And when I meet my friends I always go to coffee shop after dinner.
I know the caffeine is not good for our health.
>>Correct
But I feel that my stress disappear when I drink coffee.
>>Correct
The price of coffee at
franchise such as star bugs is more expensive than junk food.
>> The price of coffee at franchise such as star bucks is more expensive than junk food.
But I can remove my stress when I smell the aroma of coffee.
>>Correct
>> But I can release my stress whenever I smell the aroma of coffee.Better
If coffee disappear in the world, I wouldn뭪 work in my company any more.
>> If coffee disappear in the world, I couldn뭪 work in my company any more.
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