10. 25 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Directions: Answer the question using complete sentences.
Question: Do you ever read magazines or news articles about health? If yes, what subject(s) do you find the most interesting?
I'm very interested in my health even though i'm not sick. So I often read news articles about health. I read the facts which every people may know, for example, color foods are very good and instant foods are bad for our health. It is not interesting so much because it's very familiar facts. What I was most interested in is the facts which are not familiar.
1. If you laugh for 10 minutes, you will live 2 days more.
2. If you kiss with your lover, you will be not likely to have a cold.
That facts that I remember now are very interesting to me.
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I\'m very interested in my health even though i\'m not sick.
>> I\'m very interested about my health even though i\'m not sick.
So I often read news articles about health.
>> So, I often read news articles about health.
I read the facts which every people may know, for example, color foods are very good and instant foods are bad for our health.
>> I read facts which every people may know, for example, color foods are very good and instant foods are bad for our health.
It is not interesting so much because it\'s very familiar facts.
>> It doesn\'t appear interesting to me because these are familiar facts.
What I was most interested in is the facts which are not familiar.
>> What I was most interested in are the facts which are not familiar.
1. If you laugh for 10 minutes, you will live 2 days more.
1. If you laugh for 10 minutes, you will live 2 days more.
>> The first is, If you laugh for 10 minutes, you will live 2 days more.
2. If you kiss with your lover, you will be not likely to have a cold.
2. If you kiss with your lover, you will be not likely to have a cold.
>> The second one is, if you kiss with your lover, you will not likely to have cold.
That facts that I remember now are very interesting to me.
That facts that I remember now are very interesting to me.
>> These facts that I remember now are very interesting to me.
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