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2018-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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[Choose a form of transportation (such as cars, trains, boats, planes, or subways) and explain how it has changed people’s lives.] I like subways system in whole world. It is economic and faster than a private car in urban city. For example, the people living in Seoul are using subway to commute everyday. The subway is faster than car. When I live in Japan, I heard the people having car license become smaller and smaller due to the development of public transportation. Almost all transportation system is very useful to the people's lives. Moreover, public transportation is one solution to reduce air pollutants.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Wonderful of you for doing your homework! ^ ^

You made a very good point here! But, remember to use your articles \"a\", \"an\" and \"the\" well. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I like subways system in whole world.

>>I like subway systems in the whole world.
It is economic and faster than a private car in urban city.

>>It is economic and faster than a private car in an urban city.
For example, the people living in Seoul are using subway to commute everyday.

>>For example, the people living in Seoul are using the subway to commute everyday.
The subway is faster than car.

>>The subway is faster than a car.
When I live in Japan, I heard the people having car license become smaller and smaller due to the development of public transportation.

>>When I was in Japan, I heard that the number of people applying for drivers license have decreased due to the development of public transportation.
Almost all transportation system is very useful to the people\'s lives.

>>Almost all transportation system is very useful to people\'s lives.
Moreover, public transportation is one solution to reduce air pollutants.

>>Moreover, a public transportation is one solution to reduce air pollution.

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