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>>What do you think of the conscription in your country?
The conscription is necessary in South Korea.
But also there are many problems in the process is a true.
Unless structural improvement enforces, conscription will remain as a system that is only dissatisfied.
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Jean
>>What do you think of the conscription in your country?
The conscription is necessary in South Korea. But also there are many problems in the process is a true.
>> The conscription is necessary in South Korea. However, we can\'t deny that there are many problems in the process of enlistment.
Unless structural improvement enforces, conscription will remain as a system that is only dissatisfied.
>> Unless structural changes are introduced and enforced, the conscription will remain as a system that only gives dissatisfaction to the general public.
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