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Well, I think that most people will be done online closely in the future. I not sure how science and technical will develop dramatically in the future. But, it will be possible done shopping online to many part of our life. However, some people want to go to actual store directly like me. In my case, I’d like to go to offline store directly to buy something. For instance, I go to clothes store to buy some pants, shirts and jacket. Because, I’d like to look at clothes directly in stores and check size and color as well. Then, I will buy it from internet that I wanted. If I got the clothes online shop, I will get a good deal. I think it was so reasonable price on the internet. So, I always get new clothes from online shop these day. Nowadays, due to COVID-19 I didn’t go to shopping center to buy something at all. Many people purchase something online. COVID-19 was changed our lives. I think it will be never come back to normal. In the end, we will adapt to changed live well. That’s it.
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Good evening Mr. [이름]!
I\'m still hoping that everything will go back to normal soon.
Thank you for your answer! :)
Well, I think that most people will be done online closely in the future.
>>> Well, I think most people will be close to online in the future.
I not sure how science and technical will develop dramatically in the future.
>>> I not sure how scientific and technical will develop dramatically in the future.
But, it will be possible done shopping online to many part of our life.
>>> However, online shopping will be possible in many parts of our lives.
However, some people want to go to actual store directly like me.
>>> CORRECT!
In my case, I’d like to go to offline store directly to buy something.
>>> CORRECT!
For instance, I go to clothes store to buy some pants, shirts and jacket.
>>> For example, I go to a clothing store to buy pants, shirts, and jackets.
Because, I’d like to look at clothes directly in stores and check size and color as well.
>>> Because I want to see the clothes in person at the store and check the size and color.
Then, I will buy it from internet that I wanted.
>>> Then I\'ll buy it online the things that I want.
If I got the clothes online shop, I will get a good deal.
>>> If I go to an online shop, I will get a good price.
I think it was so reasonable price on the internet.
>>> I think the price was too reasonable on the Internet.
So, I always get new clothes from online shop these day.
>>> So these days, I always buy new clothes online.
Nowadays, due to COVID-19 I didn’t go to shopping center to buy something at all.
>>> Nowadays, due to COVID-19 I didn’t go to the shopping center to buy something at all.
Many people purchase something online.
>>> CORRECT!
COVID-19 was changed our lives.
>>> COVID-19 is changing our lives.
I think it will be never come back to normal.
>>> CORRECT!
In the end, we will adapt to changed live well. That’s it.
>>>In the end, we will adapt well to the changed way of living. That\'s it.
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