10. 26. Homework

2018-10-26 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

Answer the question in not less than 5 sentences: Have you witnessed any sign of discrimination against a particular person? I had witnessed the sign of discrimination during high school days for many times. The teachers in charge for 3 years all didn't allow us to go home until 9 PM. We should study in the classroom. But they allowed some students who have high grade to go home early. I felt it's discrimination.

강사 첨삭

I had witnessed the sign of discrimination during high school days for many times. The teachers in charge for 3 years all didn\'t allow us to go home until 9 PM. We should study in the classroom. But they allowed some students who have high grade to go home early. I felt it\'s discrimination.


I had witnessed the sign of discrimination during high school days many times. The teachers for 3 years didn\'t allow us to go home until 9 PM. We should study in the classroom. But they allowed some students who have high grades to go home early. I felt a discrimination. (It is also a bullying)

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