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2018-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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[Talk about five specific goals you want to accomplish this year, and explain how you are going to accomplish them.] The beginning of this year, I set several goals I want to accomplish this year. Among them, first one is publishing over five research articles. I finished almost all. This is most realistic performance. And second one is having more longer time with my husband. When I live in Japan, we just met one time per month. Fortunately, on this year, we met almost every weekend. Third one is climbing the Halla mountain. I didn't go the top of Mt. Halla, but I complete half course. Forth goal is reading book more than twenty. So, I bought an electronic book and reading a book when I have a short time. I didn't perfectly finish every goal but it's going on step by step. I can tell you about the achievement in new year ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^

Wow! Your goals are very specific and quite amazing! And your able to accomplish some and working on the rest. Congratulations!

I have also set goals for myself this year, but unfortunately, the year is almost over and I haven\'t even accomplished any!  ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah



The beginning of this year, I set several goals I want to accomplish this year.

>>In the beginning of this year, I set several goals I wanted to accomplish.
Among them, first one is publishing over five research articles.

>>Correct 
I finished almost all.

>>Correct 
This is most realistic performance.

>>This is the most realistic performance.
And second one is having more longer time with my husband.

>>And second one is having a much longer time with my husband. 
When I live in Japan, we just met one time per month.

>>When I lived in Japan, we only met once in a month. 
Fortunately, on this year, we met almost every weekend.

>>Fortunately, this year, we meet almost every weekend. 
Third one is climbing the Halla mountain.

>>Correct
I didn\'t go the top of Mt. Halla, but I complete half course.

>>I was not able to reach the top of Mt. Halla, but I was able to climbed half of it. 
Forth goal is reading book more than twenty.

>>My fourth goal is reading more than twenty books.
So, I bought an electronic book and reading a book when I have a short time.

>>So, I bought an electronic book and I read even for a short time. 
I didn\'t perfectly finish every goal but it\'s going on step by step.

>>Correct
I can tell you about the achievement in new year ^^

>>Correct

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