10/26 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^
Wow! Your goals are very specific and quite amazing! And your able to accomplish some and working on the rest. Congratulations!
I have also set goals for myself this year, but unfortunately, the year is almost over and I haven\'t even accomplished any! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
The beginning of this year, I set several goals I want to accomplish this year.
>>In the beginning of this year, I set several goals I wanted to accomplish.
Among them, first one is publishing over five research articles.
>>Correct
I finished almost all.
>>Correct
This is most realistic performance.
>>This is the most realistic performance.
And second one is having more longer time with my husband.
>>And second one is having a much longer time with my husband.
When I live in Japan, we just met one time per month.
>>When I lived in Japan, we only met once in a month.
Fortunately, on this year, we met almost every weekend.
>>Fortunately, this year, we meet almost every weekend.
Third one is climbing the Halla mountain.
>>Correct
I didn\'t go the top of Mt. Halla, but I complete half course.
>>I was not able to reach the top of Mt. Halla, but I was able to climbed half of it.
Forth goal is reading book more than twenty.
>>My fourth goal is reading more than twenty books.
So, I bought an electronic book and reading a book when I have a short time.
>>So, I bought an electronic book and I read even for a short time.
I didn\'t perfectly finish every goal but it\'s going on step by step.
>>Correct
I can tell you about the achievement in new year ^^
>>Correct
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