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2010-10-27 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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When you have a request for your boss, how do you approach him/her? When I have a request for my boss, first of all, I ask to my boss about her opinion politely. After listening her general idea, I send email including my detail idea to her. To read and write email for job is helpful to arrange my thought rather than to speak. And I can find my error or mistakes on my opinion before sending email, so I think I can express my request more well. To drag oneself out of bed/ Rise and shine When I was high school student, I hated to drag myself out of bed to go school. My mom always shouted “Rise and shine!” to me to make me awake every morning . At that time, it was no use the bell of alarm.

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When you have a request for your boss, how do you approach him/her?

When I have a request for my boss, first of all, I ask to my boss about her opinion politely.

>> When I have a request for my boss, first of all, I ask her opinion politely.
After listening her general idea, I send email including my detail idea to her.

>> After listening to her general idea, I send her an email discussing the details of my idea.
To read and write email for job is helpful to arrange my thought rather than to speak.

>> At work, writing an email to arrange my thoughts is helpful rather than saying it right away.

And I can find my error or mistakes on my opinion before sending email, so I think I can express my request more well.

>> And I can see the errors or mistakes in my opinion before sending my email, so I think I can express my request better.
To drag oneself out of bed/ Rise and shine

When I was high school student, I hated to drag myself out of bed to go school.

>> When I was a high school student, I hated to drag myself out of bed to go to school.
My mom always shouted “Rise and shine!” to me to make me awake every morning .

>>My mom always shouted "Rise and shine!" to make me wake up every morning.
At that time, it was no use the bell of alarm.

>>At that time, the alarm clock was no use.

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