10.27 Homework

Hi ma'am! Here's my second homework today. Pleasw check the sentences. Describe an important festival in your country. When is it celebrated? What do people do to celebrate it? There are a lot of important festivals in Korea. Of course most of them are suitable for the season.Flowers-related festivals held in spring season,sea-festivals held in summer.Generally, many kind of festivals held in fall season.I guess fall is the best season to enjoy the festival because the weather outside is beautiful and cool.Generally, people enjoy taking pictures,drinking alchohol,watching show and walking around the festival in Korea.I will go outside and enjoy the fall festival this year. Thank you!

Hi Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing all your homework today. Please check my corrections. Take care! ~Kelly^^ Hi ma\'am! Here\'s my second homework today. >> Correct. Pleasw check the sentences.>> Please check the sentences.Describe an important festival in your country. When is it celebrated? What do people do to celebrate it?There are a lot of important festivals in Korea. >> Correct Of course most of them are suitable for the season. >> Correct Flowers-related festivals held in spring season,sea-festivals held in summer. >> Flower festivals are held in spring season while sea festivals are held in summer. Generally, many kind of festivals held in fall season. >> Generally, many types of festivals are held in fall season. I guess fall is the best season to enjoy the festival because the weather outside is beautiful and cool. >> I guess, fall is the best season to enjoy the festival because the weather outside is beautiful and cool. Generally, people enjoy taking pictures, drinking alchohol, watching show and walking around the festival in Korea. >> Generally, people enjoy taking pictures, drinking alchohol, watching showS and walking around the festival in Korea. I will go outside and enjoy the fall festival this year.>> CorrectThank you! >> Correct