10. 27 Homework

2017-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Lorna

학생이 쓴 원문

Directions: Answer the question using complete sentences not more than 10. Question: Where is the best place in your country to see or experience nature? I think there're the most beautiful 2 places in South Korea. First place is GyeongJu. There's various Korean heritage in GyongJu, for example, Bulguksa, Anapji pond, Cheomseongdae. Korean students go to GyeongJu as a school trip very frequently. Second place is Jeju Island. There're many beautiful natural places, for example, Seongsan Ilchulbong Tuff Cone, Hallasan Mountain. Many people go to Jeju Island to heal their emotions. There's a Korean song about persuading us to go to Jeju Island to heal our emotions. It's very good song. You can hear the song. ---> https://youtu.be/Icc8cZeur-8

강사 첨삭

Hey there, [이름]!!^_^

How are you doing today?

Wow!! It\'s Monday again!:)

How was your weekend?

I hope that you enjoyed your weekend.

Anyway, I will surely listen to that song :)!

Thank you so much.

I will see you on our next class.

~ T. Lorna^_^

I think there\'re the most beautiful 2 places in South Korea.

>> I think there are two most beautiful places in South Korea.
First place is GyeongJu. There\'s various Korean heritage in GyongJu, for example, Bulguksa, Anapji pond, Cheomseongdae.

>> The first place is Gyeong Ju.

There\'s various Korean heritage in GyongJu, for example, Bulguksa, Anapji pond, Cheomseongdae.

>> There are various Korean heritage in Gyeong Ju just like Bulguksa, Anapji pond, and Cheomseongdae.

Korean students go to GyeongJu as a school trip very frequently.

>> Most Korean students frequently go to Gyeong Ju for a school trip.

Second place is Jeju Island.

>> The second place is Jeju island.

There\'re many beautiful natural places, for example, Seongsan Ilchulbong Tuff Cone, Hallasan Mountain.

>> There are many beautiful natural places namely Seongsan Ilchulbong Tuff Cone and Hallasan Mountain in Jeju island.

Many people go to Jeju Island to heal their emotions.

>> Correct!

There\'s a Korean song about persuading us to go to Jeju Island to heal our emotions.

>> Correct!

It\'s very good song.

>> Correct!

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