10.28 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
In 7 sentences, describe a historical place in your country. Where is it? What is special about it?
Kuengjoo is one of the historical place in Korea.There are so many cultural assets that preserved over 1000 years, such as Bulguksa temple,Seokgulam grotto, Cheomseongdae for observation. I went to there a few weeks ago with my wife. we toured that cultural heritage for two days and we took a lot of pictures from place to place. It was very impressive travel.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for sharing some historical places in your country. Good job for today. Just keep on improving your English skills. Have a safe day!~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.In 7 sentences, describe a historical place in your country. Where is it? What is special about it?Kuengjoo is one of the historical place in Korea.
>> Kuengjoo is one of the historical places in Korea.
There are so many cultural assets that preserved over 1000 years, such as Bulguksa temple,Seokgulam grotto, Cheomseongdae for observation.
>> There are so many cultural assets that were preserved for over 1000 years, such as the Bulguksa temple,S eokgulam grotto, and Cheomseongdae for observation.
I went to there a few weeks ago with my wife.
>> Correct.
we toured that cultural heritage for two days and we took a lot of pictures from place to place.
>> We toured that cultural heritage for two days and we took a lot of pictures from place to place.
It was very impressive travel.>> It was a very impressive travel.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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