10/28 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was a kid, I loved the character \"hoho aunt\".
She was the character in cartoon video.
It was my favorite movie in my childhood.
She can be very small like a teaspoon and helps many people and animals.
I have liked her confidence and a mind to challenge every new thing in spite of her small body.
She was my mentor before elementary school.
It is funny, so I think the cartoon and video have big influences on kids.
Although I forgot naturally her after elementary school, sometimes I think If she is closed me I can do many things.
And when I tired and hard to something, she can give me the power to step forward.
It\'s really interesting, just a cartoon character was my mentor.
However, it is true that sometimes we can get energy and are comforted by very small and unexpected things.
강사 첨삭
Wow! Nice of you to share about this [이름]! I appreciate it! ^ ^
I had never had any inspiration as yours when I was a kid. ^ ^ Good for you! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
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She was the character in cartoon video.
She was the character in cartoon video.
>>She was a character in a cartoon show.
It was my favorite movie in my childhood.
It was my favorite movie in my childhood.
>>It was my favorite show during my childhood.
She can be very small like a teaspoon and helps many people and animals.
She can be very small like a teaspoon and helps many people and animals.
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I have liked her confidence and a mind to challenge every new thing in spite of her small body.
I have liked her confidence and a mind to challenge every new thing in spite of her small body.
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She was my mentor before elementary school.
She was my mentor before elementary school.
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It is funny, so I think the cartoon and video have big influences on kids.
It is funny, so I think the cartoon and video have big influences on kids.
>>It is funny because I think cartoons and movies have big influences on kids.
Although I forgot naturally her after elementary school, sometimes I think If she is closed me I can do many things.
Although I forgot naturally her after elementary school, sometimes I think If she is closed me I can do many things.
>>Although I have naturally forgotten about her after elementary school, sometimes I imagine that if she is with me, I can do many things.
And when I tired and hard to something, she can give me the power to step forward.
And when I tired and hard to something, she can give me the power to step forward.
>>And when I\'m feeling tired and hard up about something, she can give me power to move forward.
It\'s really interesting, just a cartoon character was my mentor.
It\'s really interesting, just a cartoon character was my mentor.
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However, it is true that sometimes we can get energy and are comforted by very small and unexpected things.
However, it is true that sometimes we can get energy and are comforted by very small and unexpected things.
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