10.29 homework
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Describe a time when you were excited.
: When I had a pajama party with my best friends, I was very excited. We cooked tteokbokki and Kimchi Fried Rice and enjoyed our meal. Next, we did a lot of funny games. Every time we do pajama party, it become my precious memory.
강사 첨삭
1. When I had a pajama party with my best friends, I was very excited.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I was so excited when I had a pajama party with my friends.
2. We cooked tteokbokki and Kimchi Fried Rice and enjoyed our meal.
>>We cooked tteokbokki and kimchi fried rice and enjoyed our meal.
3. Next, we did a lot of funny games.
>>Next, we did a lot of fun games.
4. Every time we do pajama party, it become my precious memory.
>>Every time we do a pajama party, it becomes my precious memory.
Very good, Michelle!
-. T. Melody ^^
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