10/29 homework
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Hi [이름],
Yes,Sometimes there are difficulties that we encounter in our work.But it's just part of the trials that we have in our life so don't surrender okay?..I know you can do that.
Have you ever been involved in any difficult projects sensing that it was going to be very hard to accomplish?
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When I worked at hearing aid company before, I have ever been involved in difficult projects.
>>When I worked in a company manufacturing hearing aid before,I have been involved in difficult projects
My company decided to hold on bowling competitions for deaf.
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I thought that it was a very hard to accomplish since I had to communicate with people who has difficulty in hearing.
>> I thought that it was a very hard to accomplish since I had to communicate to deaf.
The purpose for this event was great, but I faced to many problems to set up events.
>> The purpose for this event was great, but I faced to many problems setting up the event.
At that time, I was a new employee and I couldn’t tell my opinions for problems to my boss.
>> At that time, I was a new employee and I couldn't tell my opinions and problems to my boss.
The corporate image of my company became better fortunately, it was very hard to prepare for events as expected
>> The image of my company fortunately better , it was very hard to prepare for events as expected.
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