10.29 Homework

2013-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Thank you for your advice. I truely appreciate. Finally, today's works are ended. It's a so busy day. Homework. 1)The Mel Brooks original name was Melvin Kaminsky. 2)The duck's quack doesn't echo,and no one knows why. 3)The eyes of a donkey's placement in it's head enables it to see all four feet at all time. 4)The Mickey Mouse's original name was Mortimer Mouse. 5)The Hulk Hogan's real name is Terry Bollea. Byebye! see you tomorrow!

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Hi there [이름] [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework.Please go over the corrections I gave below. You misused some articles like THE. See you in class. ~~T. Kelly   Thank you for your advice. I truely appreciate. >>Thank you for your advice. I truely appreciate it.Finally, today\'s works are ended. It\'s a so busy day.>>Finally, today\'s work is finished. It was a very busy day.Homework.1)The Mel Brooks original name was Melvin Kaminsky. >>correct!2)The duck\'s quack doesn\'t echo,and no one knows why. >>correct!3)The eyes of a donkey\'s placement in it\'s head enables it to see all four feet at all time.>>The placement of a donkey\'s eyes in its head enables it to see all four feet at all times. 4)The Mickey Mouse\'s original name was Mortimer Mouse. >>Mickey Mouse\'s original name was Mortimer Mouse5)The Hulk Hogan\'s real name is Terry Bollea.>>correct!Byebye! see you tomorrow! >>Bye bye. >> OR: Good bye! >>See you tomorrow!

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