10.29 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Happy wednesday!
Describe a city you have visited and impressed you so much. Why was it so impressed?
I have been to Jeju island in Korea for my honeymoon.I remember that it was a winter season. White snow and winter beach scenerys took my breath away.At that time, I thought that my bride was the most beautiful girl all over the world. we've had long sweet winter nights in sharing love.Even though that had happened about thirty years ago,I still remembering the day's happiness. Whenever I think about our lovely trip,I feel very happy.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Mr. [이름]!
Thank you so much for what you have shared in your composition. I enjoyed reading your story.They say that Jeju Island is a famous place for honeymoon. I really wish that I could visit that famous place too. Anyway, have a nice day~
~Kelly^^
Hi ma\'am! Happy wednesday!>> Correct.
** WednesdayDescribe a city you have visited and impressed you so much. Why was it so impressed?I have been to Jeju island in Korea for my honeymoon.
>> Correct.
>> I went to Jejus Island in Korea for my honeymoon.
I remember that it was a winter season.
>> I still remember that it was winter season when I went there.
White snow and winter beach scenerys took my breath away.
>> The white snow and winter beach scenery took my breath away.
At that time, I thought that my bride was the most beautiful girl all over the world.
>> Correct.
we\'ve had long sweet winter nights in sharing love.
>> Correct.
Even though that had happened about thirty years ago, I still remembering the day\'s happiness.
>> Even though that had happened about thirty years ago, I still remember those happy days.
Whenever I think about our lovely trip,I feel very happy.>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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