10/29 homework

Hi [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework. I appreciate it! ^ ^

You gave a really wonderful insight on this one. A research demonstrates a consistent relation between violent video game use and increases in aggressive behavior, and decreases in social behavior. It\'s becoming a social problem. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I agree the issue that video games contribute to youth violence.

>>I agree with the issue that video games contribute to youth violence.
Surely, some video games can contribute to youth positively.

>>Surely, some video games can contribute to the youth positively. 
But most video game is too provocative to youth.

>>But most video games are too provocative for the youth. 
They kill people or attack in the game.

>>Correct 
And sometime we can watch the news about some youth who couldn\'t distinguish real world and virtual world.

>>And sometimes, there are news about some youths who couldn\'t distinguish real world from virtual world. 
These young people become adult with immature spirit.

>>These young people become adults with immature spirit.
Yooth can controlled and grown by adult, but anyone can control adult.

>>A youth can still be controlled and can grow as a responsible adult, but no one can control a full grown adult. (I hope this is what you meant here.) 
Only they are punished by law.

>>Correct
I think the best is preventing before breaking out the big issue.

>>I think the best is preventing it before it becomes a big issue.