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2018-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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>> Write about your army reserve training and the necessity of it. My training was just typical. It was boring, hard, given negative vibe and irritated. However I know, it is necessary for the South Korea. The South Korea has been standing the ceasefire stage. Maintaining military power is the only way to keep peace of this land.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

>> Write about your army reserve training and the necessity of it.

My training was just typical.
>> I had a typical army reserve training.

It was boring, hard, given negative vibe and irritated.
>> It was not only boring and hard but also made me feel bad vibes and irritated.

However I know, it is necessary for the South Korea.
>> However, I know that it was necessary to undergo training for the sake of our country.

The South Korea has been standing the ceasefire stage.
>> South and North Korea have agreed to a ceasefire after the war.

Maintaining military power is the only way to keep peace of this land.
>> Maintaining military power is the only way to keep the peace in this land.

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