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I made an arrangement to dental clinic for regular check up at several month ago. All of sudden, I didn’t think I can make to cancel the arrangement because I happened to work and I also came back home late at night that day. So, I had to reschedule to dental clinic another day. However, I really hate to took a care of tooth at dental clinic. After that, I didn’t go to the dental clinic for a while. Unfortunately, my tooth went to bad. I got some cavity that I didn’t get it at all before. It was my fault. I had to go to the dental clinic that I expected. Eventually, I took a care my tooth for 2 weeks since that day. I really scared and afraid of take care of tooth at dental clinic. I was afraid of sound of dental equipment when I take care of it. If I can’t go there,I don’t want to go to the dental clinic now and forever. Since then, I try to be more careful when I take care of my tooth well. And I go to the dental clinic to regular check up. Thank you for reading my story.
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Lovely day Mr. [이름]!
I\'m not afraid of the machines, but I\'m more afraid of COVID-19!
And YES, we really have to take care of our teeth because having a toothache is terrible than having a headache.
Good day and thank you for sharing!
I made an arrangement to dental clinic for regular check up at several month ago.
>>> I made an arrangement to a dental clinic for a regular check up several months ago.
All of sudden, I didn’t think I can make to cancel the arrangement because I happened to work and I also came back home late at night that day.
>>> Something suddenly came up and I thought I couldn\'t cancel my appointment, and I came home late that night.
So, I had to reschedule to dental clinic another day.
>>> So, I had to reschedule visiting the dental clinic.
However, I really hate to took a care of tooth at dental clinic.
>>> However, I really hate their service at the dental clinic.
After that, I didn’t go to the dental clinic for a while.
>>> After that, I didn\'t go to the dentist for a while.
Unfortunately, my tooth went to bad.
>>> Unfortunately, my tooth went bad.
I got some cavity that I didn’t get it at all before.
>>> I\'ve got some cavities that haven\'t been treated before.
It was my fault.
>>> CORRECT!
I had to go to the dental clinic that I expected.
>>> I had to go to the dentist as expected.
Eventually, I took a care my tooth for 2 weeks since that day.
>>> CORRECT!
I really scared and afraid of take care of tooth at dental clinic.
>>> I am really scared and afraid to go back to the dental clinic.
I was afraid of sound of dental equipment when I take care of it.
>>> The sound of dental equipment was scary.
If I can’t go there,I don’t want to go to the dental clinic now and forever.
>>> I don\'t want to go to a dental clinic forever.
Since then, I try to be more careful when I take care of my tooth well.
>>> Since then, I try to be more careful when I take good care of my teeth.
And I go to the dental clinic to regular check up.
>>> Then I go to the dentist and have a regular checkup.
Thank you for reading my story.
>>> CORRECT!
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