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Q. Why do people say laughter is the best medicine? Explain your answer.
I believe that laughter is not only an accelerator that helps endorphins release better in your body but also a good habit that makes you have a very positive attitude to life. Those ways to think positively and take a litte more time to smile could work as a medicine in your life. Laughter might be the cheapest treatment to cure both physical and mental illness. That's why I'm always trying to smile a lot.If you laugh, blessings will come your way!
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Smile!
_T.Kate^^
Q. Why do people say laughter is the best medicine? Explain your answer.
I believe that laughter is not only an accelerator that helps endorphins release better in your body but also a good habit that makes you have a very positive attitude to life.
>> I believe that laughter is not only an accelerator that helps in the release of endorphins in your body but it also aids you in having a good habit for you to have a very positive outlook of life.
Those ways to think positively and take a litte more time to smile could work as a medicine in your life.
>> Such ways as thinking positively and taking a little more time to smile could work as medicines in your life.
Laughter might be the cheapest treatment to cure both physical and mental illness.
>> Laughter might be the cheapest treatment for both physical and mental illnesses.
That\'s why I\'m always trying to smile a lot.If you laugh, blessings will come your way!
>> Correct
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts.
I was likely enlightened by your composition.
You just have to go over the corrections so your upcoming compositions will be much smoother.
Have a great day!
Smile!
_T.Kate^^
Q. Why do people say laughter is the best medicine? Explain your answer.
I believe that laughter is not only an accelerator that helps endorphins release better in your body but also a good habit that makes you have a very positive attitude to life.
>> I believe that laughter is not only an accelerator that helps in the release of endorphins in your body but it also aids you in having a good habit for you to have a very positive outlook of life.
Those ways to think positively and take a litte more time to smile could work as a medicine in your life.
>> Such ways as thinking positively and taking a little more time to smile could work as medicines in your life.
Laughter might be the cheapest treatment to cure both physical and mental illness.
>> Laughter might be the cheapest treatment for both physical and mental illnesses.
That\'s why I\'m always trying to smile a lot.If you laugh, blessings will come your way!
>> Correct
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