10/30 homework

2013-10-31 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

학생이 쓴 원문

Example: Is this ____ bag? - Is this ____? Answer: Is this her bag? - Is this hers? 1) Is that your pen? - Is it yours? 2) This is my house. - It's mine. 3) They're their children. - They're theirs) . 4) She lost her book. - She lost hers. 5) These are our folders. - These are our ours. ========================================================= Long time no see!! How are you? ^^ There was a huge project in our academy at 'he days' 6 years old children were visit our academy to expeience our program. So we prepared all decorations, games, songs and action. But there was a problem. They were too young to understand Engish. (Even Korean)-_- Some babies cried because of the 'monster'mask and they didn't wanted to sing a sing. But their mothers were satisfied. I think it's because all teachers were very kind to children and used English very well. Kids are might be bored, but for us, and their moms, it was a successful event. Phew!

강사 첨삭

Miss. [Name], hi there! Hahahha! I can imagine what you were saying about this. Anyway, to hear that everything went well after all is a great thing. I hope that you will be given more opportunities like this to showcase your talent in English. Well then see you tonight!

-T. Donna

1) Is that your pen? - Is it yours?

>> Correct!
2) This is my house. - It\'s mine.

>> Correct!
3) They\'re their children. - They\'re theirs) .

>> Correct!
4) She lost her book. - She lost hers.

>> Correct!
5) These are our folders. - These are our ours.
>> Correct!
Long time no see!!

>> Correct!
How are you? ^^
>> Correct!
There was a huge project in our academy at \'he days\' 
6 years old children were visit our academy to expeience our program.

>> There was a huge project in our academy at \'he days\'  where 6 years old children visited our academy to experience our program.
So we prepared all decorations, games, songs and action.

>> Correct!
But there was a problem. They were too young to understand Engish. 
(Even Korean)-_-

>> Correct! Or: English
Some babies cried because of the \'monster\'mask and they didn\'t wanted to sing a sing.

>> Some babies cried because of the \'monster\' mask and they didn\'t want to sing the  song.

But their mothers were satisfied. I think it\'s because all teachers were very kind to children and used English very well.

>> Correct!
Kids are might be bored, but for us, and their moms, it was a successful event. 
Phew!

>> Kids might have been bored but for us and their moms it was a successful event.  Phew!

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