10/30 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Miss. [Name], hi there! Hahahha! I can imagine what you were saying about this. Anyway, to hear that everything went well after all is a great thing. I hope that you will be given more opportunities like this to showcase your talent in English. Well then see you tonight!
-T. Donna
1) Is that your pen? - Is it yours?
>> Correct!
2)
This is my house. - It\'s mine.
>> Correct!
3)
They\'re their children. - They\'re theirs) .
>> Correct!
4) She
lost her book. - She lost hers.
>> Correct!
5)
These are our folders. - These are our ours.
>> Correct!
Long
time no see!!
>>
Correct!
How
are you? ^^
>> Correct!
There
was a huge project in our academy at \'he days\'
6
years old children were visit our academy to expeience our program.
>> There
was a huge project in our academy at \'he days\' where 6 years old children visited our academy to experience
our program.
So we
prepared all decorations, games, songs and action.
>>
Correct!
But
there was a problem. They were too young to understand Engish.
(Even
Korean)-_-
>>
Correct! Or: English
Some
babies cried because of the \'monster\'mask and they didn\'t wanted to sing a sing.
>> Some babies cried because of the \'monster\' mask and they didn\'t want to sing the song.
But their mothers were satisfied. I think it\'s because all teachers were very kind to children and used English very well.
>>
Correct!
Kids
are might be bored, but for us, and their moms, it was a successful event.
Phew!
>> Kids might have been bored but for us and their moms it was a successful event. Phew!
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