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2017-11-01 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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1. The term track and field refers to athletic events that include foot races and jumping and throwing events. 2. The citrus fruit which has been exposed to cool temperatures during maturation is sweeter and more tender than those that have not. 3. San Francisco, America's romantic city, has always been a haven for the artists and writers where have left at least part of their hearts there. 4. Canada, when I spent most of my childhood, is a country of vast plains and heavy forested areas. 5. Mistletoe, that is believed to have magic powers, is traditionally hung over doorways during the Christmas season.

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1. The term track and field refers to athletic events that include foot races and jumping and throwing events.

>> Correct
2. The citrus fruit which has been exposed to cool temperatures during maturation is sweeter and more tender than those that have not.

>>Correct
3. San Francisco, America\'s romantic city, has always been a haven for the artists and writers where have left at least part of their hearts there.

>> who
4. Canada, when I spent most of my childhood, is a country of vast plains and heavy forested areas.

>> in which
5. Mistletoe, that is believed to have magic powers, is traditionally hung over doorways during the Christmas season.

>> which

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