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Internet addiction is becoming a global concern. Internet addicts spend more and more time on the computer at the expense of relationships with family, friends and even risks of job. But if we are to rank them in order, according to studies, alcohol ranks first, followed by cigarettes, then gambling, then the internet and last would be the use of cellphones. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I think realistic serious addiction come from the internet.

>>I think realistic serious addiction comes from the internet.
We are living in networking world for 24 hours.

>>We are living in a networking world for 24 hours.
Cell phone is also is same thing.

>>Cell phones are also the same thing.
I have an experience I couldn\'t use cell phone for one week.

>>I had an experiencing not being able to use my cellphone for one week. 
At that time, I was crazy, I also surprised by myself.

>>At that time, I went crazy. I was also surprised with myself.
Alcohol, gambling, and cigarettes also have a strong addiction possibility.

>>Alcohol, gambling, and cigarettes also have strong addiction possibilities. 
But, I think the power of internet is stronger than them.

>>But, I think addiction to the internet is much stronger than the rest.
Already we can not go back to the past, but, we should try to use the internet positively.

>>We can no longer go back to the past but, what we can do is to try to use the internet wisely and positively.