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2018-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

>> What do you think of installation art? In the modern art stage, everything can become an art. The artist endow something with art then it is an art work with no doubt. Even a concept or an abstraction is also included in this rule. Those tendency show that the media is no longer mentioned when discussing what is an work of art. Accroding to this logic, the installation art is just a branch of art and I can agree with it.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

>> What do you think of installation art?

In the modern art stage, everything can become an art.
>> correct

The artist endow something with art then it is an art work with no doubt.
>> When an artist declares something as an, then it certainly becomes an art.

Even a concept or an abstraction is also included in this rule.
>> correct

Those tendency show that the media is no longer mentioned when discussing what is an work of art.
>> Those tendencies show that the media is no longer mentioned when discussing what is considered a work of art.

Accroding to this logic, the installation art is just a branch of art and I can agree with it.
>> According to this logic, the installation art is just a branch of art and I agree with it.

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