10.31 Homework

2013-10-31 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Homework Do you laugh a lot? How important is laughter? Well, usually I tend to have a lot of laughter. I think laughter gives us positive attitude. Even though that is self-concious one,it will helps to keep our healthy. And it will affect our future nicely. Thank you! Bye bye! See you tomorrow in our class.I hope next 10 minutes conversation.

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Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for being diligent in doing your homework. Have a great day and enjoy studying English! See you tomorrow. ~t. KELLY~ Do you laugh a lot? How important is laughter?Well, usually I tend to have a lot of laughter. >> Well, usually I tend to laugh a lot.I think laughter gives us positive attitude. >> Correct.Even though that is self-concious one,it will helps to keep our healthy. >> Even though that is a self-motivation, it will help us to be healthy.And it will affect our future nicely.>> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.Bye bye! See you tomorrow in our class. >> Correct. I hope next 10 minutes conversation. >> I\'m looking forward to our 10-minute conversation.

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