10/31 homework

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-Teacher Jedah 

I know very well about the harmful effect of computer games.

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 The point is confusing to real and fictional worlds.

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 When I was in graduate school, I was have hooked on a computer game \'angry bird\' for a while.

>>When I was in graduate school, I was hooked on a computer game \'angry bird\' for a while.
 I played the game almost every day over 4 hours, finally, I surprised myself when I imagine playing the game before sleeping.

>>I played the game almost every day over 4 hours, finally, I was even more  surprised when I imagine playing the game before sleeping
 I was very focused on the game for two weeks.

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 My ability to concentrate is incomparable to anything what I did in my life.

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 Almost always I thought about the game.

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 It is very scary because it means I could not distinguish my real life and game world.

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 I think if it was young people, the situation is getting more serious.

>>I think for young people these days, the situation is more serious.
 Moreover, most young people like very violent and impractical games.

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Even there are some people who is very concentrated on a computer game and so stay at home and only playing the game.

>>Even there are some people who are very concentrated on computer games and stay home plying only games.  
 We have a word to define that kind of person.

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 If they want to be a progamer, it\'s okay.

>>If they want to be programmers, it\'s okay.
 But, we have to find happiness in the real world.

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