10/4 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
homework
Do you save money?
Yes, I save money. and I want to saving money much more. because I will be going to travel all of the world in the future.
When I get some sickness, It will keep our family and me. so I really need to saving money.
I got back to korea yesterday after finishing my china schedule. last week I visited to Shanghai,Qingdao,Weifang in china. I've had a meeting with my customers
and discussed about some problems.It was very busy and hard trip.
Anyway, So great to see you again!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]! I\'m happy to see your name on the composition board again. But most importantly, I\'m happy that you\'re back in Korea. That means, we\'re going to study again starting tomorrow. I hope you have a great day! See you in class!
~t. KELLY~
homework
Do you save money?
Yes, I save money.
>> Correct.
and I want to saving money much more.
>> And I want to save much more money.
because I will be going to travel all of the world in the future.
>> because I will be travelling all around the world in the future.
When I get some sickness, It will keep our family and me.
>> When I am sick, it can help me and my family.
so I really need to saving money.
>> so I really need to save money.
I got back to korea yesterday after finishing my china schedule.
>> I got back to Korea yesterday after finishing my appointment in China.
last week I visited to Shanghai,Qingdao,Weifang in china.
>> Last week I visited Shanghai, Qingdao, and Weifang in china.
I\'ve had a meeting with my customers
>> I had a meeting with my customers.
and discussed about some problems.
>> Correct.
>> OR: and discussed some problems.
It was very busy and hard trip.
>> It was a very busy and hard trip.
Anyway, So great to see you again!
>> Correct.
~t. KELLY~
homework
Do you save money?
Yes, I save money.
>> Correct.
and I want to saving money much more.
>> And I want to save much more money.
because I will be going to travel all of the world in the future.
>> because I will be travelling all around the world in the future.
When I get some sickness, It will keep our family and me.
>> When I am sick, it can help me and my family.
so I really need to saving money.
>> so I really need to save money.
I got back to korea yesterday after finishing my china schedule.
>> I got back to Korea yesterday after finishing my appointment in China.
last week I visited to Shanghai,Qingdao,Weifang in china.
>> Last week I visited Shanghai, Qingdao, and Weifang in china.
I\'ve had a meeting with my customers
>> I had a meeting with my customers.
and discussed about some problems.
>> Correct.
>> OR: and discussed some problems.
It was very busy and hard trip.
>> It was a very busy and hard trip.
Anyway, So great to see you again!
>> Correct.
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