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Please talk about the best Reality TV show that you have watched.
The best reality TV show I have watched is about people who live alone. This program shows the loneliness of singles . It was the best reality show I have watched because I believe that this show really tells us the real life. Unlike many other so-called reality show, I felt like this show is only showing the truth because the scenes were so understandable. Because every scene was so real I could laugh at the realism. I felt that sometimes there can be nothing more funny than our lives. I love this show because of its realism and how it makes me laugh.
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Hi [이름]. Great work! :)
-T.Gabby :)
The best reality TV show I have watched is about people who live alone.
>> Correct.
This program shows the loneliness of singles .
>> This program shows the loneliness of single people.
It was the best reality show I have watched because I believe that this show really tells us the real life.
>> Correct.
Unlike many other so-called reality show, I felt like this show is only showing the truth because the scenes were so understandable.
>> Correct.
Because every scene was so real I could laugh at the realism.
>> Correct.
I felt that sometimes there can be nothing more funny than our lives.
>> Correct.
I love this show because of its realism and how it makes me laugh.
>> Correct.
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