10/5 homework
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Thank you for your feedback! I did my homework but today I found that it was not saved, so I write my homework again!
Homework.
I'm not agree with his opinion. I believe it depends on many different cases.
I saw the students who studied very hard but couldn't achieve the score they had wanted.
On the other hand some students didn't studied that hard could get the better scores. They were very smart.
I think the pecentage is different for each person. There are someone who have to do their best 30 % compared to their ability. And to someone 50% or so.
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Hi again, [이름]!^^
Thank you for being industrious in making your homework.
The first one may not have been saved but still, you managed to
send me your answer.^^
Take care of yourself!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Thank you for your feedback!
>> Correct
I did my homework but today I found that it was not saved, so I write my homework again!>> I did my homework but today I found that it was not saved, so I have written my homework again!Homework.I\'m not agree with his opinion.
>> I don\'t agree with his opinion.
I believe it depends on many different cases.>> CorrectI saw the students who studied very hard but couldn\'t achieve the score they had wanted.>> I saw students who studied very hard but couldn\'t achieve the score they had wanted. On the other hand some students didn\'t studied that hard could get the better scores.
>> On the other hand, some students didn\'t study that hard but could get better scores.
They were very smart.>> CorrectI think the pecentage is different for each person.
>> Correct
There are someone who have to do their best 30 % compared to their ability.
>> There are some who have to do their best up to 30% only compared to their ability.
And to someone 50% or so.
>> Some has to do 50% or so.
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