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I live in first floor of apartment. There are three bedrooms. Two bedrooms are my children's room Last bedroom is my room. Inside my room, I have no bed because my children sometimes slept with me. So I don't need it. And then, I have a television, a dressing table and a computer. My room has a restroom and a small window next to door. Inside my room always dark because of a small window. I want to a big window. My bedroom is very simple. I like simple style. I have to share my room with my husband because I am married.

Hello [이름] - It is always nice to hear from you. I appreciate you doing the homework again. I can imagine how nice and simple your apartment is. It sounded like it is spacious enough for your family. ^^ Anyway - I have written some corrections below for you to check too. I\'ll talk to you later.   = Teacher Bella =     I live in first floor of apartment. >> I live in the first floor of the apartment building. There are three bedrooms. >> Correct!Two bedrooms are my children\'s room >> The two bedrooms are my children\'s room. Last bedroom is my room. >> The last bedroom is mine. Inside my room, I have no bed because my children sometimes slept with me. >> I have no bed in my room because sometimes my children sleep with me. So I don\'t need it. >> Correct!And then, I have a television, a dressing table and a computer. >> Furthermore , I have a television, a dressing table and a computer. My room has a restroom and a small window next to door. >> My room already has a restroom and a small window next to the door. Inside my room always dark because of a small window. >> My room is always dark because of the small window. I want to a big window. >> I want a big window. My bedroom is very simple. >> Correct!I like simple styles. >> Correct!I have to share my room with my husband because I am married. >>  I have to share the room with my husband because we are married.