10.6 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good afternoon! Thanks for your efforts.I felt very happy and interesting in ous class this morning.
What are you most thankful for in life.
Actually, I think that I am thankful everying that I live in my life. Especially, I am healthy and I have a good job comparatively.All my family are healty,too. So I am proud of what I have. I always have a thankful mind about that.
Thank you! Have a terrific day!
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]!
I\'m glad that you enjoyed our class this morning. I had fun, too. Looking forward to having more classes with you. Anyway, enjoy your day!
~Kelly^^
Hi ma\'am! Good afternoon!
>> Correct.
>> or: Hi ma\'am! Good morning!
Thanks for your efforts.
>> Thanks for your effort.
>> Thanks for all your efforts.
I felt very happy and interesting in ous class this morning.>> I felt very happy and interested in our class this morning.What are you most thankful for in life.Actually, I think that I am thankful everying that I live in my life.
>> Actually, I think that I am thankful for everything that I have in my life.
Especially, I am healthy and I have a good job comparatively.
>> Most especially, because I am healthy and I have a good job.
All my family are healty,too.
>> All members of my family are healthy, too.
So I am proud of what I have.
>> Correct.
I always have a thankful mind about that.
>> Correct.Thank you! Have a terrific day!
>> Correct.
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