10.6 Homework

2014-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi ma'am! Good afternoon! Thanks for your efforts.I felt very happy and interesting in ous class this morning. What are you most thankful for in life. Actually, I think that I am thankful everying that I live in my life. Especially, I am healthy and I have a good job comparatively.All my family are healty,too. So I am proud of what I have. I always have a thankful mind about that. Thank you! Have a terrific day!

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr. [이름]! I\'m glad that you enjoyed our class this morning. I had fun, too. Looking forward to having more classes with you. Anyway, enjoy your day! ~Kelly^^ Hi ma\'am! Good afternoon! >> Correct. >> or: Hi ma\'am! Good morning! Thanks for your efforts. >> Thanks for your effort. >> Thanks for all your efforts. I felt very happy and interesting in ous class this morning.>> I felt very happy and interested in our class this morning.What are you most thankful for in life.Actually, I think that I am thankful everying that I live in my life. >> Actually, I think that I am thankful for everything that I have in my life. Especially, I am healthy and I have a good job comparatively. >> Most especially, because I am healthy and I have a good job. All my family are healty,too. >> All members of my family are healthy, too. So I am proud of what I have. >> Correct. I always have a thankful mind about that. >> Correct.Thank you! Have a terrific day! >> Correct.

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