10.6 Homework

2015-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good morning! Is maintaining a cultural identity important, or should we all try to become one global culture? I think that maintaining a cultural identity is important because it might makes us to feel more confidence. So I think it's not good to accept foreign culture thoutlessly. We need to respect our a good custom in order to get our own identity. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Mr. [이름]! Thank you for always doing your homework. Keep up the good job. Continue being patient in learning English!^^See you again tomorrow.^^ ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.Is maintaining a cultural identity important, or should we all try to become one global culture?I think that maintaining a cultural identity is important because it might makes us to feel more confidence. >> I think that maintaining a cultural identity is important because it makes us feel more confident.   So I think it\'s not good to accept foreign culture thoutlessly. >> Correct. ***thoughtlessly We need to respect our a good custom in order to get our own identity.>> We need to respect our good customs in order to get our own identity.Thank you! >> Correct.

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