10.6 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
Is maintaining a cultural identity important, or should we all try to become one global culture?
I think that maintaining a cultural identity is important because it might makes us to feel more confidence. So I think it's not good to accept foreign culture thoutlessly. We need to respect our a good custom in order to get our own identity.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for always doing your homework. Keep up the good job. Continue being patient in learning English!^^See you again tomorrow.^^
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.Is maintaining a cultural identity important, or should we all try to become one global culture?I think that maintaining a cultural identity is important because it might makes us to feel more confidence.
>> I think that maintaining a cultural identity is important because it makes us feel more confident.
So I think it\'s not good to accept foreign culture thoutlessly.
>> Correct.
***thoughtlessly
We need to respect our a good custom in order to get our own identity.>> We need to respect our good customs in order to get our own identity.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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