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2016-09-08 · 첨삭 강사 Lisa

학생이 쓴 원문

>>> Hey! This is about breakfast! Yes. I am ready. >>> 1. What do you prefer to eat for breakfast? Rice or bread? I want eat bread for breakfast. >>> 2. Do you eat fruit every day? No. I don't eat fruit every day. >>> 3. What do you like to drink in the morning? Coffee, tea or milk? I like to drink water in the morning. >>> 4. Are you the one who cooks for your breakfast? I can't translate this sentens. >>> 5. Is breakfast important? Why or why not? I think is not important. because like I do not eat eat rice.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! How are you doing? Good to know that you are eating in the morning! Did you know that it is the most important meal? It will energized you for the whole day! So eat your breakfast everyday!

>>> Hey! This is about breakfast!

Yes. I am ready.

>>> Correct!

>>> 1. What do you prefer to eat for breakfast? Rice or bread?
I want eat bread for breakfast.

>>> I want to eat bread for breakfast.

>>> 2. Do you eat fruit every day?
No. I don\'t eat fruit every day.

>>> Correct!

>>> 3. What do you like to drink in the morning? Coffee, tea or milk?

I like to drink water in the morning.

>>> Correct!

>>> 4. Are you the one who cook for your breakfast?

I can\'t translate this sentens.

>>> I can\'t understand this sentence.

>>> Oh! This is questions is asking you if... Who cooks for your breakfast? Is it you or your mom? ^.^

>>> 5. Is breakfast important? Why or why not?

I think is not important. because like I do not eat eat rice.

>>> I think it is not that important because I do not want to eat rice in the morning.

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