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Hi, Ms. [이름]!

Good job, Ms. [이름]! Your grammar had greatly improve! This is because you had been studying really hard. Keep going, you are doing a really great job! See you in class!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

My apartment is very old so I want to talk about it.
>> correct!
I am living in an apartment and I moved there 10 years ago.

>> correct!
I didn\'t redecorate my old apartment until today.

>> correct!
So I want to replace the old wallpaper.

>> correct!
I want a bright and modern design new wallpaper.

>> I want a bright and modern wallpaper design.
It can change my living room in light color.
>> It can change my living room\'s light and color.

Also I want to buy a big bed because I don\'t have the bed in my bedroom.

>> I also want to buy a big bed because I don\'t have a bed in my bedroom.
And I want to redecorate my children\'s room.

>> correct!
However it is not easy because I need a lot of money to change my room.

>> correct!