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2017-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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If I could change one thing about my past, I want to change my speaking to my mother. When I was young, I was very a bad daughter to my mother. I didn't know that the past can't back again. I realized it very late. So I can't tell my mother about speaking of sorry.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [이름]!

As you know, my father passed away four years ago. I understand how you feel about your mother. I have many regrets also. I have many things I haven\'t said or done for my father but like you said, we can\'t bring back the past. Sad but true.

Take care!

~T. Lynn

If I could change one thing about my past, I want to change my speaking to my mother.

>> If I could change one thing about my past, I want to change the way I spoke to my mother.
 When I was young, I was very a bad daughter to my mother.

>> When I was young, I was a very  bad daughter to my mother.
 I didn\'t know that the past can\'t back again.

>> I didn\'t know then that I can\'t go back to the past.
 I realized it very late.

>> It was too late when I realized it.
 So I can\'t tell my mother about speaking of sorry.

>> So I can\'t tell my mother how sorry I am.

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