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2017-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

For a long time, I woke up late, despite I have to go to the office early. However, a few years ago, I decided that I will have good habits. So I changed my English class time in the morning. So I should wake up early to attend English class. And I started exercise in the evening. I hope my children don't regret after they grow up like me. But I know it is not easy.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!
At least you did something to change your \"bad\" habits. Some people don\'t change even if they know that their is something wrong. Very good, Ms. [이름]!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
For a long time, I woke up late, despite I have to go to the office early.
>> For a long time, I woke up late, despite that I have to go to the office early.
However, a few years ago, I decided that I will have good habits.
>> correct!
So I changed my English class time in the morning.
>> correct!
So I should wake up early to attend English class.
>> So I should wake up early to attend my English class.
And I started exercise in the evening.
>> And I started exercising in the evening.
I hope my children don\'t regret after they grow up like me.
>> I hope my children won\'t have regrets when they grow up like me.
But I know it is not easy.
>> correct!

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