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2017-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I believe alien so I believe there is other life in the universe. But I don' want to meet them. They are very dangerous in movies. Ah.. E.T which is character in movie is not dangerous but I don't want. I guess alien has very high intelligenter than us. So I am very scared to meet alien.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [이름]!

So guess you won\'t meet an alien even if someone will pay you a million dollars? Think about it.

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I believe alien so I believe there is other life in the universe.

>> I believe in aliens so I believe there is another life in the universe.
But I don\' want to meet them.

>> correct!
They are very dangerous in movies.

>> correct!

Ah.. E.T which is character in movie is not dangerous but I don\'t want.

>> Ah.. E.T which is a character in a movie is not dangerous but I don\'t want to meet him too.
I guess alien has very high intelligenter than us.

>> I guess aliens are more intelligent than us.
So I am very scared to meet alien.

>> So I am very scared to meet an alien.

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