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2017-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Rain

학생이 쓴 원문

I was afriad that I am left alone in the world. I have no family, parent, sister and friends. It was my worst nightmare. My best enjoyable dream was that I am a rich woman with my family and I am always youth. It means I can stay with my family forever

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]!

Wow! You have free time to do your compositions. Good job! ^^

Yes, the best dream that we can have is a dream with our family.

Being with them forever and being with them happily.^^

But, it\'s only and it will only be a dream so make the best out of it!

Spend spectacular time with them!

~Teacher Rain~

I was afriad that I am left alone in the world.

>> I was afraid that I was left out alone in this world.
 I have no family, parent, sister and friends.

>> I don\'t have family, parents, siblings and friends.
 It was my worst nightmare.
>> CORRECT
My best enjoyable dream was that I am a rich woman with my family and I am always youth.

>> My best enjoyable dream was that I became a rich woman with my family and I was forever young.
 It means I can stay with my family forever

>> It meant that I can stay with my family forever.

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