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2018-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I made my annual vacation today. Because last week, I was very tried. My teamleader sometimes make his annual vacation when we have some problems. He wants to impress to a new executive. He alwasy reports a good things to the executive. So when he makes his annual vacation, I have to report a bad things instead of him. It is very difficult. I can't understand him. Anyway I have to do a lot of things last week. That's the reason why I made my annual vacation.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [이름]!(\",)

Your team leader is very selfish. I don\'t also understand why there are people like him in this world. Anyway, enjoy your short break from work.

Take care!(\",)

~T. Lynn

I made my annual vacation today.

>> I\'m on leave today.
 Because last week, I was very tried.

>> correct!
 My teamleader sometimes make his annual vacation when we have some problems.

>> My team leader sometimes go on leave when we have some problems.
 He wants to impress to a new executive.

>> He wants to impress the new executive.
 He alwasy reports a good things to the executive.

>>  He always reports good things to the executive.
 So when he makes his annual vacation, I have to report a bad things instead of him.

>> So when he is on vacation, I have to report the bad things instead of him.
 It is very difficult.

>> correct!
 I can\'t understand him.

>> correct!
 Anyway, I have to do a lot of things last week.

>> correct!
 That\'s the reason why I made my annual vacation.

>> That\'s the reason why I filed my leave.

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