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강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!(\",)
Your team leader is very selfish. I don\'t also understand why there are people like him in this world. Anyway, enjoy your short break from work.
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
I made my annual vacation today.
>> I\'m on leave today.
Because last week, I was very tried.
>> correct!
My teamleader sometimes make his annual vacation when we have some problems.
>> My team leader sometimes go on leave when we have some problems.
He wants to impress to a new executive.
>> He wants to impress the new executive.
He alwasy reports a good things to the executive.
>> He always reports good things to the executive.
So when he makes his annual vacation, I have to report a bad things instead of him.
>> So when he is on vacation, I have to report the bad things instead of him.
It is very difficult.
>> correct!
I can\'t understand him.
>> correct!
Anyway, I have to do a lot of things last week.
>> correct!
That\'s the reason why I made my annual vacation.
>> That\'s the reason why I filed my leave.
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