10.8 Homework

2014-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good morning! What is your greaest fear in life? My greatest fear in life is my family's unexpected disease. my family are healthy so far of course include me.In order to keep our health we are usually eating healthy food and taking exercise,too. I think I already become an old guy to work anymore in our company. Frankly, I am afraid of lossing my job these days.I don't know how long can I work at this company. Thank you!

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Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. Please go over my corrections. Happy holiday! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.What is your greaest fear in life?My greatest fear in life is my family\'s unexpected disease. >> My greatest fear in life is for my to family to sufer from an unexpected disease.   my family are healthy so far of course include me. >> My family and I are healthy of course. In order to keep our health we are usually eating healthy food and taking exercise,too. >> In order to keep our health, we usually eat healthy foods and exercise, too. I think I already become an old guy to work anymore in our company. >> I think I am already an old guy who still work in the company. Frankly, I am afraid of lossing my job these days. >> Correct.>> spelling: losing I don\'t know how long can I work at this company.>> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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