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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
I live in a neighborhood with many friendly people.
>> Correct
I don\'t have many close neighbors.
>>Correct
I don\'t have enough time to meet my kind neighbors because of my job.
>> Correct
My neighbors helped me with my children.
>> Correct
When my children were sick, they took care of them while I worked in my office.
>> Correct
or
>> When my children were sick, they took care of them while I was at work.
I can\'t forget it.
>> I can\'t forget it.
My husband and I invited them to join us for dinner.
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or
>> My husband and I once invited them to us for dinner.
Nowadays we only meet once in a blue moon because we are very busy.
>> Correct
or
>> Nowadays, we only meet once in a blue moon because we are very busy,
Let me tell you about my mobile phone.
>> Correct
It has a lot of functions.
>> Correct
For example it can be used as a camera phone, an mp3, a TV phone, a call phone, a GPS and an internet phone.
>> Correct
or
>> It can be used as a camera, MP3, TV, for phone calls, GPS, and as an internet phone.
It is small so it can be always with me.
>> It is small, so I can always take it with me.
When I lost it, I couldn\'t do all my work.
>> When I lose it, I wouldn\'t be able to do my work.
Because it is very expensive so I can\'t buy it again for a long time.
>> Because it is expensive, I wouldn\'t be able to buy one again for a long time.
I like listening to music and watching movies on my mobile phone.
>> Correct
I think it is the most useful thing in the world.
>> Correct
If I don\'t have a mobile phone, my life would probably be different and difficult.
>> Correct
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