10.9 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Directions: Explain this quote using complete sentences not more than 10.
Quote: "Beauty is in the eye of the beholder."
I think my cat who is 4 years old and 6.1kg is the most beautiful in the world. It's not joking and I'm serious. I know that's why I love my cat very much. 4 years ago, I fell in love with my cat. His eyes are so blue and pure. I saw many cats on the internet or TV, and in the street but any cat was not beautiful as my cat.
"Beauty is in the eye of the beholder." Right. If people love someone, the person will be seen very beautiful. But If plople hate someone, the person will be seen very ugly. People who have a ugly face can be loved by their lovers and their lovers may think the ugly face is charming.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, my beautiful [이름]!!:)
How are you doing today?
Are you having a great Wednesday?
Very good in doing your homework;
I will see you later.
~ T. Lorna^^
>> I think my cat who is 4 years old and weighs 6.1 kilograms is for me the most beautiful thing in the world.
It\'s not joking and I\'m serious.
>> I\'m not joking. I am serious.
I know that\'s why I love my cat very much.
>> I love my cat very much.
4 years ago, I fell in love with my cat.
>> Four years ago, I fell in love with my cat.
His eyes are so blue and pure.
>> Correct!
I saw many cats on the internet or TV, and in the street but any cat was not beautiful as my cat.
>> I saw many cats on the internet, television and on the streets but nothing is more beautiful than my cat.
\"Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.\" Right.
\"Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.\" Right.
>> Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, right?
If people love someone, the person will be seen very beautiful.
>> If people love someone then they tend to see the person as beautiful.
But If plople hate someone, the person will be seen very ugly.
>> But if people hate someone then they usually tend to see this person as ugly.
People who have a ugly face can be loved by their lovers and their lovers may think the ugly face is charming.
>> Some people who have an ugly face can be possibly loved by their lovers because their lovers think that they are charming.
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